Kim Kyoung Mok(45) wrote:hello~
These days I enjoy here internet site.^^
So today, I have one question.
"If you want high score, you will have to study hard."
is it correct?
Hi. I think your sentence is good enough, but here is my recommandation
for you about the sentence.
"If you want to get better grade, you will have to work harder."
This might have a little different word feeling, because I used "better
score" instead of your "high score". However I think my sentence gives
sentence a bit more natural flow due to its comparison sentence
structure on each part.